Culture boys

 

80% of people thought that the documentary matched the pitch, but one person thought it leant too  far towards expository than Participatory. However, since my documentary was to be a mix of both, i do not see this as a big issue and don't feel like I need to change anything. When asking for feedback people were saying that credits could be added in order for a cleaner ending and a more professional look, therefore I will go back and add credits. For my credits i used an online template from envato elements which saved time and animation. People also said that the way I spoke could have been clearer. I cannot change the initial recordings, however in the future I can take this onboard and learn that my natural voice is hard for microphones to pick up and that I will need to speak more clearly. The pink files are the credits. They play shortly and then fade to black.