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Forms response chart. Question title: Did the video match the Pitch. Number of responses: 5 responses.



80% of people thought that the documentary matched the pitch, but one person thought it leant too  far towards expository than Participatory. However, since my documentary was to be a mix of both, i do not see this as a big issue and don't feel like I need to change anything.


Forms response chart. Question title: Does it meet the initial brief ?. Number of responses: 5 responses.Forms response chart. Question title: Did you find the Documentary engaging?. Number of responses: 5 responses.

Forms response chart. Question title: Do you believe It works with the target audience?. Number of responses: 5 responses.




















When asking for feedback people were saying that credits could be added in order for a cleaner ending and a more professional look, therefore I will go back and add credits. For my credits i used an online template from envato elements which saved time and animation.

People also said that the way I spoke could have been clearer. I cannot change the initial recordings, however in the future I can take this onboard and learn that my natural voice is hard for microphones to pick up and that I will need to speak more clearly.






The pink files are the credits. They play shortly and then fade to black.







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